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once, i felt my walls weaken
they wavered for an instant
just long enough for you
to try to break them
then i reinforced them
couldnt believe you betrayed me
like all the others

i wanted to let you in
pulled it down
brick by brick
and thats no easy task
i called for you to wait for me
but patience is a virtue

some are blessed
and some are cursed
as we seem to be
why should i believe
when all you did was lie

hide the truth from the world
under anger and love and flames
i cant breathe
choking on the burning ash

tears serve only
to feed the flames
there is no hope

our only chance for survival
humanity in its purest form

connection.
©2005-2009 ~xpaganangelx
:iconxpaganangelx:

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8.23.05

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:iconsalem-17:
hmmm...thats a very interesting poem...i think a lot of people fear to let their guard down because they dont want to be hurt by anyone anymore...brilliant work!
:iconhawkeblade:
great stuff girl. it's so easy to put up the walls once you've been betrayed but if you never let anyone in to connect with you, you become bitter and broken....a shell of a person
:iconxpaganangelx:
thanks! yea...i dont let my walls down too often.

--
"Il pleut dans mon coeur comme il pleut dans la ville." ~Verlaine





Translation- "It rains in my heart like it rains in the city."
:iconxpaganangelx:
yea, i know...im working on it.

--
"Il pleut dans mon coeur comme il pleut dans la ville." ~Verlaine





Translation- "It rains in my heart like it rains in the city."
:iconsalem-17:
same here...and your welcome...=)
:iconvilkusvoman:
thats my girl, keep me walled in with you though
:iconxpaganangelx:
:) u bet

--
"Il pleut dans mon coeur comme il pleut dans la ville." ~Verlaine





Translation- "It rains in my heart like it rains in the city."

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